From 6822cfa5f066fcbf79ded85419d59a97decc67b9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: nl6720 <nl6720@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 9 Jul 2021 12:56:54 +0300
Subject: [PATCH] docs: improve wording when mentioning the acronym "ESP"

"ESP" is "EFI system partition", so "ESP partition" is redundant.

(cherry picked from commit 250db1bf02b9fd73f2e0604acddbc20937c67d19)

Conflict:NA
Reference:https://github.com/systemd/systemd/commit/6822cfa5f066fcbf79ded85419d59a97decc67b9
---
 docs/BOOT_LOADER_INTERFACE.md           | 8 ++++----
 docs/BOOT_LOADER_SPECIFICATION.md       | 4 ++--
 man/systemd-boot.xml                    | 4 ++--
 src/boot/bootctl.c                      | 2 +-
 src/systemctl/systemctl-start-special.c | 2 +-
 5 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/BOOT_LOADER_INTERFACE.md b/docs/BOOT_LOADER_INTERFACE.md
index be3b6e401d..e9155117b9 100644
--- a/docs/BOOT_LOADER_INTERFACE.md
+++ b/docs/BOOT_LOADER_INTERFACE.md
@@ -76,10 +76,10 @@ variables. All EFI variables use the vendor UUID
   * `1 << 6` → The boot loader supports passing a random seed to the OS.
 
 * The EFI variable `LoaderRandomSeed` contains a binary random seed if set. It
-  is set by the boot loader to pass an entropy seed read from the ESP partition
-  to the OS. The system manager then credits this seed to the kernel's entropy
-  pool. It is the responsibility of the boot loader to ensure the quality and
-  integrity of the random seed.
+  is set by the boot loader to pass an entropy seed read from the ESP to the OS.
+  The system manager then credits this seed to the kernel's entropy pool. It is
+  the responsibility of the boot loader to ensure the quality and integrity of
+  the random seed.
 
 * The EFI variable `LoaderSystemToken` contains binary random data,
   persistently set by the OS installer. Boot loaders that support passing
diff --git a/docs/BOOT_LOADER_SPECIFICATION.md b/docs/BOOT_LOADER_SPECIFICATION.md
index b87246ede1..7b5b19700a 100644
--- a/docs/BOOT_LOADER_SPECIFICATION.md
+++ b/docs/BOOT_LOADER_SPECIFICATION.md
@@ -61,8 +61,8 @@ Everything described below is located on a placeholder file system `$BOOT`. The
 * On disks with GPT (GUID Partition Table)
   * If the OS is installed on a disk with GPT, and an Extended Boot Loader Partition or XBOOTLDR partition for short, i.e. a partition with GPT type GUID of `bc13c2ff-59e6-4262-a352-b275fd6f7172`, already exists, it should be used as `$BOOT`.
   * Otherwise, if the OS is installed on a disk with GPT, and an EFI System Partition or ESP for short, i.e. a partition with GPT type UID of `c12a7328-f81f-11d2-ba4b-00a0c93ec93b`) already exists and is large enough (let's say 250MB) and otherwise qualifies, it should be used as `$BOOT`.
-  * Otherwise, if the OS is installed on a disk with GPT, and if the ESP partition already exists but is too small, a new suitably sized (let's say 500MB) XBOOTLDR partition shall be created and used as `$BOOT`.
-  * Otherwise, if the OS is installed on a disk with GPT, and no ESP partition exists yet, a new suitably sized (let's say 500MB) ESP should be created and used as `$BOOT`.
+  * Otherwise, if the OS is installed on a disk with GPT, and if the ESP already exists but is too small, a new suitably sized (let's say 500MB) XBOOTLDR partition shall be created and used as `$BOOT`.
+  * Otherwise, if the OS is installed on a disk with GPT, and no ESP exists yet, a new suitably sized (let's say 500MB) ESP should be created and used as `$BOOT`.
 
 This placeholder file system shall be determined during _installation time_, and an fstab entry may be created. It should be mounted to either `/boot/` or `/efi/`. Additional locations like `/boot/efi/`, with `/boot/` being a separate file system, might be supported by implementations. This is not recommended because the mounting of `$BOOT` is then dependent on and requires the mounting of the intermediate file system.
 
diff --git a/man/systemd-boot.xml b/man/systemd-boot.xml
index 139f79fa6b..2135d9eb36 100644
--- a/man/systemd-boot.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-boot.xml
@@ -73,8 +73,8 @@
       <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemctl</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry> for
       details.</para></listitem>
 
-      <listitem><para>An EFI variable set by the boot loader informs the OS about the ESP partition used
-      during boot. This is then used to automatically mount the correct ESP partition to
+      <listitem><para>An EFI variable set by the boot loader informs the OS about the EFI System Partition used
+      during boot. This is then used to automatically mount the correct EFI System Partition to
       <filename>/efi/</filename> or <filename>/boot/</filename> during OS runtime. See
       <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd-gpt-auto-generator</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>
       for details.</para></listitem>
diff --git a/src/boot/bootctl.c b/src/boot/bootctl.c
index df8b0542c9..fa8c600321 100644
--- a/src/boot/bootctl.c
+++ b/src/boot/bootctl.c
@@ -1337,7 +1337,7 @@ static int verb_status(int argc, char *argv[], void *userdata) {
                 sd_id128_t bootloader_esp_uuid;
                 bool have_bootloader_esp_uuid = efi_loader_get_device_part_uuid(&bootloader_esp_uuid) >= 0;
 
-                print_yes_no_line(false, have_bootloader_esp_uuid, "Boot loader sets ESP partition information");
+                print_yes_no_line(false, have_bootloader_esp_uuid, "Boot loader sets ESP information");
                 if (have_bootloader_esp_uuid && !sd_id128_equal(esp_uuid, bootloader_esp_uuid))
                         printf("WARNING: The boot loader reports a different ESP UUID than detected!\n");
 
diff --git a/src/systemctl/systemctl-start-special.c b/src/systemctl/systemctl-start-special.c
index 3edb65be61..56068d25f5 100644
--- a/src/systemctl/systemctl-start-special.c
+++ b/src/systemctl/systemctl-start-special.c
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ static int load_kexec_kernel(void) {
                 return log_error_errno(r,
                                        "No kexec kernel loaded and autodetection failed.\n%s",
                                        is_efi_boot()
-                                       ? "Cannot automatically load kernel: ESP partition mount point not found."
+                                       ? "Cannot automatically load kernel: ESP mount point not found."
                                        : "Automatic loading works only on systems booted with EFI.");
         if (r < 0)
                 return r;
-- 
2.33.0

